Pink Parasol – Chapter 2

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Tim Hillebrant

says:

Great story, Marcia. It stands alone nicely on it’s own, and I love the voice of Miriam, and how she treats her mother and daughter alike.

No nits that I could see.

Tim

Mary Cooney-Glazer

says:

Went back to read part 1. You’ve got the beginning of a lovely story here. The dialogue between Miriam and Jim is natural and flows well. Her busy world makes her an interesting, modern woman. . You introduced the complexities nicely, showing, not telling. Already there’s a bit if mystery with Bill having the same name. Nice writing, Marcia. I want to read more. Mary

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