No Sunshine

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says:

Great poem Tim!

Makes me wanna break out in the blues/jazz song, “Aint No Sunshine When She’s Gone!” (Do you know the one?) I’ll be crooning that tune all day now, LOL.

An apt description of teenage angst, love it! Write on!

Tim Hillebrant

says:

Thank you, Marcia!

Yup, I know that song, it’s a favorite of mine. It’s also the song to the tune of which I wrote this poem. Glad you enjoyed!!

Tim

IanRob

says:

I like the lines “Neither party, has done any wrong. But sometimes love it goes astray.” It makes it a little sadder because of the inevitability of it. If someone has made a mistake or done wrong the situation can be discussed but when “sometimes love it goes astray.” it’s just inevitable. I like those lines, they summed it up so succinctly.

Tim Hillebrant

says:

Thanks, Ian. I appreciate you taking the time to review.
Sometimes, love goes in it’s own directions, regardless of the heart’s desire to keep it on another path.

Tim

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