a fiery red moon

in a glacial autumn sky

shines effectual





























Author Notes

It is a challenge to write haiku to get the exact images and meaning. It is accomplished by many re-writes.

8 Comments for “Haiku”


Beautifully done, Patricia! It’s a great skill to paint a beautiful picture I just a few words, within the restrictions of a haiku. Very impressed!


Thank you for comments Dave. Writing Haiku is a challenge but worth it when it comes out right. What I am finding challenging is the new writing challenge. Describing a character in one sentence. I either have too much description or too little.


Wonderful imagery in this piece very well done cheers

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