velvet wings flutter
an erratic flight ensues
ends on a petal
© 2016, Craig Lincoln. All rights reserved.
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velvet wings flutter
an erratic flight ensues
ends on a petal
© 2016, Craig Lincoln. All rights reserved.
The author has granted WritersCarnival.ca, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
4 Comments for “Butterfly”
Anisa Irwin
says:Hmmm… this one ended kind of abruptly for me. The first two lines created a strong image and then the last sort of ripped me away from it. Perhaps that was your intention, though.
Anisa
Craig Lincoln
says:Thanks Anisa and yep the end of a flight is abrupt cheers
Rebecca Braun
says:Such a brief whisp of a wonderful image of the butterfly in flight. This poem totally captures and describes the flight and end of flight in an elegant way with very few words. Love this!
Write On!
Becky
Craig Lincoln
says:Thank you Becky