Birth of a Stream




water singing

running over the rocks

birth of the stream

Author Notes

Another haiku from this mornings Ginko walk

9 Comments for “Birth of a Stream”


To make this an outstanding Haiku I would use a more descriptive word for (the) rocks and rather than (the) stream (a) stream. I have nits with the word (the). All in all, a beautiful Haiku.

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