And Away We Go

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reigny dai

says:

One other thing. “Paralyzed” bookends the piece because in the beginning, she’s figuratively paralyzed by indecision. In the end, if she did choose to throw herself into traffic, she’d probably end up literally paralyzed.

Thanks everyone for reading and commenting.

says:

The mind of a manic depressive with SAD? On a diet … I liked her racing mind.

reigny dai

says:

You nailed it. Racing thoughts is what I really wanted to showcase. You hear people try to describe them, but never see a visual interpretation of them. Thank you. I’m glad you liked her mind. It’s a carnival.

Raymond Tobaygo

says:

Good morning, Dai

Good, tight post. The staccato flow was spot on. You certainly captured the thoughts of a confused, somewhat paranoid individual. Enjoyed.

Tip: If you double space the post, it would make it much easier to read.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

reigny dai

says:

Good morning Raymond,

Thank you. That my was goal. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Your tip is accurate; I need my white space, too. However, the formatting was part of the message, to show that the thoughts all ran together without interruption.

I shall. You do the same.

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